Yes, so I just showed this to everyone and it appears I've fallen into a debocle! No one else understands what's happening, but me!
This is no time to be discouraged. I must make a series of pages introducing the characters to explain what the heck is going on.
For those that are curious. Those monkeys are fighting an evil scientist. Each monkey has a super-power, and some weapon instead of hands. People complained that it was hard to distinguish the characters from different angles, especially because Professor Ankushead's head is elongated. It looks quite different from the front than from the side.
Perhaps coloring it would also help. I have much to learn in the way of artist's blindness. Of course I understand what's going on, because I created it! It is easy to graze over the back story without insight from a third party! Thank you friends who helped me!
I've been told that this comic right here is very similar to mine in terms of plot-confusingness. I love it!
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